#1MinFiction: “The Feast”

Written for Nortina’s #1MinFiction Challenge at Lovely Curses

Prompt: ”Feast”


I take a spoon of porridge, he is still looking at me. I feel I will spill everything and destroy this feast. His eyes are dancing with joy and something else, something I cannot see amid the throng of voices and sounds. Why can’t they just stop to let me see whether he loves me or



And I stop there. I don’t want to keep going because the minute has passed. You are free to think of the rest of the story.

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  1. Ahh! Such a cliff hanger! But that’s the perfect place to stop. Does he love me? Or…
    Yes! Love this!
    Thanks for participating in #1MinFiction! Hope to see you again next week. đŸ™‚

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